Good suggestions for revisions. I honestly don't feel like the rewording is at all removed from the original. Or it may be that variations can be created that are worded for appropriate audiences. And yes, I'm offering a critique to the work but to be fair to the original, it has been so useful for so long. Our world has evolved a bit and hopefully the critique can produce a more thoughtful tool set. :) Thanks for the comment CW, miss you.